What do you think of my lyrics?

The world's a flock of sheep? Okay so some of it is good. I am no professional but some of this doesn't fit in. I write to. It just doesn't seem deep enough. Songs are emotions you have to put anything and everything into them. They aren't just a jumble of words there is always a meaning. Think harder listen to your heart let your hands just write and see what comes that's what I do and it works. Just find that place where you bottle every single emotion inside of you anger, sadness, anything just let it all out because this doesn't sound like you are letting everything out.